In this paragraphs I am going to write about a question that called my attention. If you may be in a video game what will you choose? My answer is very interesting but not sorprising. I am going to tell you what I will do.
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L.ArangoO
2/2/2014 04:50:57 am
I think your opinion about this game was really complete and detailed. I think you should check some of the writing mistakes and i liked how you put questions maybe to hook the reader.
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A. Fuentes
2/2/2014 09:35:58 pm
I liked a lot your post, I also like FIFA 14, and I think you explained well why would you choose this game but I think you could add a little more detail to the post and also a picture or video for us to see how you play, or just to see the game.
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2/4/2014 07:52:30 am
I think you made a great job, I think I will also choose Fifa 14. Your post was interesting but it was really short and you have many grammatical errors.
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